Saturday, February 18, 2012

Max writes a story

Max and Olin were going to the circus. They were excited and happy. It was along ride. When they got there they saw the elephants. Then they saw the giraffes. It was fun. Then they saw the tigers. And then the circus was over. It was time to go home after along circus. Then they went home in there car. And went into there house and ate dinner. And they went to bed.
The next morning Max and Olin woke up it was 7 o'clock a.m. we played hockey. Olin had three points. Max had four points. Max won. But Max is six and Olin is three so it is unfair. But Olin was still sad. Max was very happy. Max went bowling with his dad. Olin stayed at his his house with his mom. Olin played with his toys. He was happy. And he had very very fun at his house.
THE END